{"id":1320,"date":"2014-06-17T19:36:03","date_gmt":"2014-06-17T18:36:03","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=1320"},"modified":"2014-06-17T19:36:03","modified_gmt":"2014-06-17T18:36:03","slug":"iv15","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=1320","title":{"rendered":"IV:15"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n
\n”\u0427\u0442\u043e \u043c\u043e\u0436\u0435\u0442 \u0431\u044b\u0442\u044c \u043d\u0430 \u0441\u0432\u0435\u0442\u0435 \u0445\u0443\u0436\u0435
\n\u0421\u0435\u043c\u044c\u0438, \u0433\u0434\u0435 \u0431\u0435\u0434\u043d\u0430\u044f \u0436\u0435\u043d\u0430
\n\u0413\u0440\u0443\u0441\u0442\u0438\u0442 \u043e \u043d\u0435\u0434\u043e\u0441\u0442\u043e\u0439\u043d\u043e\u043c \u043c\u0443\u0436\u0435
\n\u0418 \u0434\u043d\u0435\u043c \u0438 \u0432\u0435\u0447\u0435\u0440\u043e\u043c \u043e\u0434\u043d\u0430;
\n\u0413\u0434\u0435 \u0441\u043a\u0443\u0447\u043d\u044b\u0439 \u043c\u0443\u0436, \u0435\u0439 \u0446\u0435\u043d\u0443 \u0437\u043d\u0430\u044f
\n(\u0421\u0443\u0434\u044c\u0431\u0443, \u043e\u0434\u043d\u0430\u043a\u043e \u0436, \u043f\u0440\u043e\u043a\u043b\u0438\u043d\u0430\u044f),
\n\u0412\u0441\u0435\u0433\u0434\u0430 \u043d\u0430\u0445\u043c\u0443\u0440\u0435\u043d, \u043c\u043e\u043b\u0447\u0430\u043b\u0438\u0432,
\n\u0421\u0435\u0440\u0434\u0438\u0442 \u0438 \u0445\u043e\u043b\u043e\u0434\u043d\u043e-\u0440\u0435\u0432\u043d\u0438\u0432!
\n\u0422\u0430\u043a\u043e\u0432 \u044f. \u0418 \u0442\u043e\u0433\u043e \u043b\u044c \u0438\u0441\u043a\u0430\u043b\u0438
\n\u0412\u044b \u0447\u0438\u0441\u0442\u043e\u0439, \u043f\u043b\u0430\u043c\u0435\u043d\u043d\u043e\u0439 \u0434\u0443\u0448\u043e\u0439,
\n\u041a\u043e\u0433\u0434\u0430 \u0441 \u0442\u0430\u043a\u043e\u044e \u043f\u0440\u043e\u0441\u0442\u043e\u0442\u043e\u0439,
\n\u0421 \u0442\u0430\u043a\u0438\u043c \u0443\u043c\u043e\u043c \u043a\u043e \u043c\u043d\u0435 \u043f\u0438\u0441\u0430\u043b\u0438?
\n\u0423\u0436\u0435\u043b\u0438 \u0436\u0440\u0435\u0431\u0438\u0439 \u0432\u0430\u043c \u0442\u0430\u043a\u043e\u0439
\n\u041d\u0430\u0437\u043d\u0430\u0447\u0435\u043d \u0441\u0442\u0440\u043e\u0433\u043e\u044e \u0441\u0443\u0434\u044c\u0431\u043e\u0439?\n<\/td>\n		\nFinns n\u00e5got v\u00e4rre, s\u00e5 jag sp\u00f6rjer,
\n\u00e4n en familj av s\u00e5dant slag
\natt hustrun makens brister s\u00f6rjer
\ni ensamhet b\u00e5d’ natt och dag?
\nOch d\u00e4r den tr\u00e5km\u00e5ns hon behagar
\n(fast han sitt \u00f6de j\u00e4mt beklagar)
\n\u00e4r oavbrutet tyst och tv\u00e4r,
\noch svartsjukt brusar upp och sv\u00e4r?
\nOch s\u00e5’n \u00e4r jag. Men var det detta
\nni s\u00f6kte n\u00e4r ni skrev s\u00e5 v\u00e4l
\noch lade ner er rena sj\u00e4l
\ni n\u00e5gra enkla raders hetta?
\n\u00c4r detta d\u00e5 den bittra lott
\nsom ni utav ert \u00f6de f\u00e5tt?\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/table>\n

Den h\u00e4r strofen bjuder p\u00e5 ett antal rim som delas mellan \u00f6vers\u00e4ttare. F\u00f6rst ett som jag inte delar: v\u00e4rre\/herre p\u00e5 raderna ett och tre anv\u00e4nds av s\u00e5v\u00e4l Jensen och Johansson p\u00e5 svenska som Rosenberg p\u00e5 danska.<\/p>\n

Sedan det som jag delar: Bland de 144 strofer som jag hittills har \u00f6versatt har jag aldrig landat s\u00e5 n\u00e4ra en annan \u00f6vers\u00e4ttare som p\u00e5 de sista sex raderna i den h\u00e4r strofen. I Johanssons version lyder de s\u00e5 h\u00e4r:<\/p>\n

\nJa, s\u00e5dan \u00e4r jag. Var det detta
\nni s\u00f6kte med er rena sj\u00e4l
\ni brevet, som ni skrev s\u00e5 v\u00e4l
\nmed s\u00e5dan enkelhet och hetta?
\n\u00c4r detta d\u00e5 den tunga lott
\nni av ett bistert \u00f6de f\u00e5tt?\n<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Vadan denna p\u00e5tagliga likhet? N\u00e4r man ser p\u00e5 rimmen s\u00e5 kan man sk\u00f6nja ett visst m\u00f6nster, d\u00e4r nyckelord p\u00e5 ryska (\u043f\u043b\u0430\u043c\u0435\u043d\u043d\u043e\u0439, \u0434\u0443\u0448\u043e\u0439, \u0436\u0440\u0435\u0431\u0438\u0439) har relativt r\u00e4ttframma svenska \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningar (hetta, sj\u00e4l, lott) som i sin tur rimmar bra med andra svenska ord (detta, v\u00e4l, f\u00e5tt) av r\u00e4tt allm\u00e4n karakt\u00e4r, men vilka r\u00e5kar passa n\u00f6jaktigt som \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningar av andra ryska ord (\u0442\u043e\u0433\u043e, \u0442\u0430\u043a\u0438\u043c \u0443\u043c\u043e\u043c, \u043d\u0430\u0437\u043d\u0430\u0447\u0435\u043d). Sammanfattningsvis tycks just det h\u00e4r \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningsproblemet ha en (enda?) ganska intuitiv l\u00f6sning p\u00e5 modern svenska.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

Finns n\u00e5got v\u00e4rre, s\u00e5 jag sp\u00f6rjer,
\n\u00e4n en familj av s\u00e5dant slag… Forts\u00e4tt l\u00e4sa →<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8,3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1320","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-kap4","category-strofer"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1320","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=1320"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1320\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1324,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1320\/revisions\/1324"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=1320"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=1320"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=1320"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}