{"id":5,"date":"2010-06-28T22:56:18","date_gmt":"2010-06-28T22:56:18","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=5"},"modified":"2011-01-30T23:27:16","modified_gmt":"2011-01-30T22:27:16","slug":"i1","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=5","title":{"rendered":"I:1"},"content":{"rendered":"<table>\n<tbody>\n<tr>\n<td>\u00ab\u041c\u043e\u0439 \u0434\u044f\u0434\u044f \u0441\u0430\u043c\u044b\u0445 \u0447\u0435\u0441\u0442\u043d\u044b\u0445 \u043f\u0440\u0430\u0432\u0438\u043b,<br \/>\n\u041a\u043e\u0433\u0434\u0430 \u043d\u0435 \u0432 \u0448\u0443\u0442\u043a\u0443 \u0437\u0430\u043d\u0435\u043c\u043e\u0433,<br \/>\n\u041e\u043d \u0443\u0432\u0430\u0436\u0430\u0442\u044c \u0441\u0435\u0431\u044f \u0437\u0430\u0441\u0442\u0430\u0432\u0438\u043b<br \/>\n\u0418 \u043b\u0443\u0447\u0448\u0435 \u0432\u044b\u0434\u0443\u043c\u0430\u0442\u044c \u043d\u0435 \u043c\u043e\u0433.<br \/>\n\u0415\u0433\u043e \u043f\u0440\u0438\u043c\u0435\u0440 \u0434\u0440\u0443\u0433\u0438\u043c \u043d\u0430\u0443\u043a\u0430;<br \/>\n\u041d\u043e, \u0431\u043e\u0436\u0435 \u043c\u043e\u0439, \u043a\u0430\u043a\u0430\u044f \u0441\u043a\u0443\u043a\u0430<br \/>\n\u0421 \u0431\u043e\u043b\u044c\u043d\u044b\u043c \u0441\u0438\u0434\u0435\u0442\u044c \u0438 \u0434\u0435\u043d\u044c \u0438 \u043d\u043e\u0447\u044c,<br \/>\n\u041d\u0435 \u043e\u0442\u0445\u043e\u0434\u044f \u043d\u0438 \u0448\u0430\u0433\u0443 \u043f\u0440\u043e\u0447\u044c!<br \/>\n\u041a\u0430\u043a\u043e\u0435 \u043d\u0438\u0437\u043a\u043e\u0435 \u043a\u043e\u0432\u0430\u0440\u0441\u0442\u0432\u043e<br \/>\n\u041f\u043e\u043b\u0443\u0436\u0438\u0432\u043e\u0433\u043e \u0437\u0430\u0431\u0430\u0432\u043b\u044f\u0442\u044c,<br \/>\n\u0415\u043c\u0443 \u043f\u043e\u0434\u0443\u0448\u043a\u0438 \u043f\u043e\u043f\u0440\u0430\u0432\u043b\u044f\u0442\u044c,<br \/>\n\u041f\u0435\u0447\u0430\u043b\u044c\u043d\u043e \u043f\u043e\u0434\u043d\u043e\u0441\u0438\u0442\u044c \u043b\u0435\u043a\u0430\u0440\u0441\u0442\u0432\u043e,<br \/>\n\u0412\u0437\u0434\u044b\u0445\u0430\u0442\u044c \u0438 \u0434\u0443\u043c\u0430\u0442\u044c \u043f\u0440\u043e \u0441\u0435\u0431\u044f:<br \/>\n\u041a\u043e\u0433\u0434\u0430 \u0436\u0435 \u0447\u0435\u0440\u0442 \u0432\u043e\u0437\u044c\u043c\u0435\u0442 \u0442\u0435\u0431\u044f!\u00bb<\/td>\n<td>\u201dMin farbrors hedersgrubblerier<br \/>\nhar nu f\u00f6rbytts i sjukdom, ve!<br \/>\nS\u00e5 vinner sk\u00e4lmen sympatier:<br \/>\nen b\u00e4ttre plan \u00e4r sv\u00e5r att se.<br \/>\nAv hans exempel m\u00e5 vi l\u00e4ra,<br \/>\nmen Gud s\u00e5 tr\u00e5kigt, p\u00e5 min \u00e4ra,<br \/>\natt sjukling vakta natt som dag,<br \/>\nej minsta steg \u00e4r till behag,<br \/>\nbedr\u00e4gligt bara omsorg visa:<br \/>\nden halvv\u00e4gs d\u00f6de g\u00f6ra glad<br \/>\noch r\u00e4ta kuddarna p\u00e5 rad.<br \/>\nMed sorgsen min hans kur bespisa,<br \/>\nen h\u00f6rbar suck, men inom mig<br \/>\nblott tanken: M\u00e5tte fan ta dig!\u201d<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/tbody>\n<\/table>\n<p>D\u00e4rmed har vi antr\u00e4tt v\u00e5r resa. En Onegin-strof \u00f6versatt, 388 kvar.<\/p>\n<p>Det finns tv\u00e5 inversioner i \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningen ovan som f\u00f6rtj\u00e4nar en kommentar. F\u00f6r det f\u00f6rsta har ryskans &#8221;\u0434\u0435\u043d\u044c \u0438 \u043d\u043e\u0447\u044c&#8221; bytt plats till &#8221;natt som dag&#8221;. Det vore i och f\u00f6r sig inte s\u00e5 uppseendev\u00e4ckande om det inte vore s\u00e5 att samma inversion ocks\u00e5 f\u00f6rekommer i oproportionerligt m\u00e5nga andra \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningar. Jensen (1889) skriver &#8221;natt och dag&#8221;, Rytters \u00f6vers\u00e4ttning till norska (1966) lyder &#8221;natt og dag&#8221;, Falens \u00f6vers\u00e4ttning till engelska (1990) rymmer ett &#8221;night and day&#8221;, liksom Hofstadters (1999), Johnstons (1977) och Arndts (1963).\u00a0 Av mina rimmade engelska \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningar \u00e4r det endast Deutsch (1936) som beh\u00e5ller Pusjkins ordningsf\u00f6ljd med sitt &#8221;daylong, nightlong&#8221;. Nabokovs (1964) orimmade \u00f6vers\u00e4ttning v\u00e4ljer, f\u00f6ga f\u00f6rv\u00e5nande, &#8221;day and night&#8221;. Legras (1961) franska \u00f6vers\u00e4ttning bevarar ocks\u00e5 originalet med &#8221;jour et nuit&#8221;, medan Markowicz (2005) med &#8221;nuits durant&#8221; helt utel\u00e4mnar dagarna.<\/p>\n<p>Den andra inversionen \u00e4r att ryskans &#8221;\u043f\u043e\u043b\u0443\u0436\u0438\u0432\u043e\u0433\u043e&#8221; blivit den &#8221;halvv\u00e4gs d\u00f6de&#8221; p\u00e5 svenska. Min spr\u00e5kk\u00e4nsla s\u00e4ger mig att en s\u00e5dan halvd\u00f6d formulering passar b\u00e4ttre p\u00e5 svenska \u00e4n en halvlevande. \u00c5ter \u00e4r det en inversion som delas av Jensen (&#8221;halfd\u00f6d kropp&#8221;), Rytter (&#8221;halvdaud mann&#8221;), Falen (\u00e4ven om &#8221;nearly dead&#8221; tar bort halvfullt\/halvtomt glas-aspekten), Hofstadter (&#8221;the half-dead&#8217;s&#8221;), Johnston (&#8221;half-dead&#8221;) och Arndt (&#8221;all but dead&#8221;). Deutsch sticker \u00e5ter ut bland de engelska rimmade \u00f6vers\u00e4ttningarna med sitt bokstavstrogna &#8221;half-alive&#8221;, som ocks\u00e5 anv\u00e4nds i Nabokovs orimmade \u00f6vers\u00e4ttning. Inversionen delas ocks\u00e5, i s\u00e5 m\u00e5tto att fokus ligger p\u00e5 d\u00f6den, i de franska versionernas &#8221;un moribond&#8221; (Legras) och &#8221;un mourant&#8221; (Markowicz).<\/p>\n<p><strong>Uppdatering:<\/strong> I samband med att jag <a href=\"http:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=496\">slutf\u00f6rde kapitel ett<\/a> \u00e4ndrade jag \u00e4ven lydelsen p\u00e5 de f\u00f6rsta fyra raderna i denna strof. Originalet fr\u00e5n juni 2010 lyder s\u00e5 h\u00e4r:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>\u201dMin farbror denne hederns gamling,<br \/>\nnu sjuk p\u00e5 allvar blivit, ve,<br \/>\ndock d\u00e4rmed \u00e4ntrat v\u00f6rdad samling,<br \/>\nen b\u00e4ttre plan \u00e4r sv\u00e5r att se.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>Det var framf\u00f6rallt den tredje raden i denna version som med lite perspektiv framstod som on\u00f6digt kryptisk och klumpig.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>\u201dMin farbrors hedersgrubblerier<br \/>\nhar nu f\u00f6rbytts i sjukdom, ve&#8230; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=5\">Forts\u00e4tt l\u00e4sa <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[4,3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-5","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-kap1","category-strofer"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=5"}],"version-history":[{"count":8,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":34,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5\/revisions\/34"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=5"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=5"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=5"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}