{"id":634,"date":"2011-05-16T22:03:31","date_gmt":"2011-05-16T21:03:31","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=634"},"modified":"2011-05-16T22:03:31","modified_gmt":"2011-05-16T21:03:31","slug":"ii14","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/?p=634","title":{"rendered":"II:14"},"content":{"rendered":"\n\n
\n\u041d\u043e \u0434\u0440\u0443\u0436\u0431\u044b \u043d\u0435\u0442 \u0438 \u0442\u043e\u0439 \u043c\u0435\u0436 \u043d\u0430\u043c\u0438.
\n\u0412\u0441\u0435 \u043f\u0440\u0435\u0434\u0440\u0430\u0441\u0441\u0443\u0434\u043a\u0438 \u0438\u0441\u0442\u0440\u0435\u0431\u044f,
\n\u041c\u044b \u043f\u043e\u0447\u0438\u0442\u0430\u0435\u043c \u0432\u0441\u0435\u0445 \u043d\u0443\u043b\u044f\u043c\u0438,
\n\u0410 \u0435\u0434\u0438\u043d\u0438\u0446\u0430\u043c\u0438 – \u0441\u0435\u0431\u044f.
\n\u041c\u044b \u0432\u0441\u0435 \u0433\u043b\u044f\u0434\u0438\u043c \u0432 \u041d\u0430\u043f\u043e\u043b\u0435\u043e\u043d\u044b;
\n\u0414\u0432\u0443\u043d\u043e\u0433\u0438\u0445 \u0442\u0432\u0430\u0440\u0435\u0439 \u043c\u0438\u043b\u043b\u0438\u043e\u043d\u044b
\n\u0414\u043b\u044f \u043d\u0430\u0441 \u043e\u0440\u0443\u0434\u0438\u0435 \u043e\u0434\u043d\u043e;
\n\u041d\u0430\u043c \u0447\u0443\u0432\u0441\u0442\u0432\u043e \u0434\u0438\u043a\u043e \u0438 \u0441\u043c\u0435\u0448\u043d\u043e.
\n\u0421\u043d\u043e\u0441\u043d\u0435\u0435 \u043c\u043d\u043e\u0433\u0438\u0445 \u0431\u044b\u043b \u0415\u0432\u0433\u0435\u043d\u0438\u0439;
\n\u0425\u043e\u0442\u044c \u043e\u043d \u043b\u044e\u0434\u0435\u0439 \u043a\u043e\u043d\u0435\u0447\u043d\u043e \u0437\u043d\u0430\u043b
\n\u0418 \u0432\u043e\u043e\u0431\u0449\u0435 \u0438\u0445 \u043f\u0440\u0435\u0437\u0438\u0440\u0430\u043b, –
\n\u041d\u043e (\u043f\u0440\u0430\u0432\u0438\u043b \u043d\u0435\u0442 \u0431\u0435\u0437 \u0438\u0441\u043a\u043b\u044e\u0447\u0435\u043d\u0438\u0439)
\n\u0418\u043d\u044b\u0445 \u043e\u043d \u043e\u0447\u0435\u043d\u044c \u043e\u0442\u043b\u0438\u0447\u0430\u043b
\n\u0418 \u0432\u0447\u0443\u0436\u0435 \u0447\u0443\u0432\u0441\u0442\u0432\u043e \u0443\u0432\u0430\u0436\u0430\u043b.\n<\/td>\n		\nS\u00e5’n v\u00e4nskap ger vi ej till andra.
\nN\u00e4r vi bak f\u00f6rdomarna sett
\nsom nollor vill vi andra klandra,
\nfast sj\u00e4lva \u00e4r vi nummer ett.
\nS\u00e5 blir Napoleon modellen,
\nmiljoner bipeder tar sm\u00e4llen
\nn\u00e4r de blott verktyg blir f\u00f6r oss
\nvars k\u00e4nsloliv helt kastat loss.
\nJevgenij b\u00e4ttre \u00e4n de flesta
\nf\u00f6rm\u00e5dde ge p\u00e5 m\u00e4nniskor akt,
\nhan k\u00e4nde f\u00f6r dem mest f\u00f6rakt –
\nmen undantag finns f\u00f6r det mesta:
\nom vissa slog han faktiskt vakt,
\ns\u00e5g upp till k\u00e4nslans fj\u00e4rran trakt.\n<\/td>\n<\/tr>\n<\/table>\n

P\u00e5 ryska rimmar ”\u041d\u0430\u043f\u043e\u043b\u0435\u043e\u043d\u044b” utm\u00e4rkt med ”\u043c\u0438\u043b\u043b\u0438\u043e\u043d\u044b”. Rosenberg k\u00f6r samma rim p\u00e5 danska: ”Napoleoner”\/”Millioner”, liksom Rytter p\u00e5 norska: ”Napoleonar”\/”millionar”. Jensens svenska version ”napoleoner”\/”millioner” rimmar dock illa med \u00e5tminstone mitt uttal.<\/p>\n

Den aktuella strofen \u00e4r, som jag tolkar Nabokovs sammanst\u00e4llning, utgiven 1826. Det betyder att det fosterl\u00e4ndska kriget<\/a> anno 1812 och slaget vid Waterloo<\/a> bara ligger n\u00e5got dussin \u00e5r tillbaka i tiden. Att referera till Napoleon \u00e4r allts\u00e5 lite grand som att idag referera till Slobodan Milo\u0161evi\u0107<\/a>.<\/p>\n

Ut\u00f6ver den vanliga strukturen rimmar den h\u00e4r strofen raderna tio\/elva med raderna tretton\/fjorton: ”\u0437\u043d\u0430\u043b”\/”\u043f\u0440\u0435\u0437\u0438\u0440\u0430\u043b”\/”\u043e\u0442\u043b\u0438\u0447\u0430\u043b”\/”\u0443\u0432\u0430\u0436\u0430\u043b” – svarande mot ”akt”\/”f\u00f6rakt”\/”vakt”\/”trakt” i min tolkning. F\u00e5 \u00f6vers\u00e4ttare har bevarat den strukturen. I min samling \u00e4r Nekrasovs esperanto-version det enda exemplet:<\/p>\n

\nSed estis ja E\u016dgen’ pli bona;
\nKaj kvankam li kun malestim’
\nRilatis al la homa \u015dim’,
\nRegulo mankas unutona:
\nLi iujn traktis kun estim’
\nKaj \u015datis senton en intim’.\n<\/p><\/blockquote>\n

Den grammatiskt bevandrade l\u00e4saren noterar s\u00e5 klart att esperanto torde vara extremt l\u00e4tt att skapa s\u00e5dana rim p\u00e5, tack vare sin extrema regelbundenhet. Detsamma kan s\u00e4gas om de ryska preteritum-former som utg\u00f6r originalet. M\u00f6nstret kan allts\u00e5 mycket v\u00e4l vara en slump.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"

S\u00e5’n v\u00e4nskap ger vi ej till andra.
\nN\u00e4r vi bak f\u00f6rdomarna sett… Forts\u00e4tt l\u00e4sa →<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[6,3],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-634","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-kap2","category-strofer"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/634","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=634"}],"version-history":[{"count":12,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/634\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":646,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/634\/revisions\/646"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=634"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=634"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.onegin.se\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=634"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}